kayncmo 发表于 2021-10-17 22:04   全显示 1楼
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长门有希(2021-10-17 23:52)提示: 好像是个女作者
女主，修仙题材，这些对本人的吸引力都非同寻常；但是有个缺点（我个人认为）想向作者提出：既然要写第一人称文，可否不要用类似“我的玉口”这样的词，毕竟再自恋也不至于称自己的嘴为玉口吧，，，
但除了这一点，其他都很好，很棒，希望作者继续加油！


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